docs: Add copywriting and design tweaks (#17514)

Follow up to https://github.com/zed-industries/zed/pull/17505. This one
contains a bit more copywriting adjustments. Figured we were using the
"You can do x..." sentence shape quite frequently, so tried to kickstart
reducing that slightly. There are also more images not loading in
complement to the one I removed, but I'm not fully sure why that's the
case.

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@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ You will need write access to the Zed repository to do this:
- Checkout `main` and ensure your working copy is clean.
- Run `./script/bump-zed-minor-versions` and push the tags
and branches as instructed.
- Wait for the builds to appear at https://github.com/zed-industries/zed/releases (typically takes around 30 minutes)
- Wait for the builds to appear on [the Releases tab on GitHub](https://github.com/zed-industries/zed/releases) (typically takes around 30 minutes)
- While you're waiting:
- Start creating the new release notes for preview. You can start with the output of `./script/get-preview-channel-changes`.
- Start drafting the release tweets.
@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ You will need write access to the Zed repository to do this:
- After the commits are cherry-picked onto the branch, run `./script/trigger-release {preview|stable}`. This will bump the version numbers, create a new release tag, and kick off a release build.
- This can also be run from the [GitHub Actions UI](https://github.com/zed-industries/zed/actions/workflows/bump_patch_version.yml):
![](https://github.com/zed-industries/zed/assets/1486634/9e31ae95-09e1-4c7f-9591-944f4f5b63ea)
- Wait for the builds to appear at https://github.com/zed-industries/zed/releases (typically takes around 30 minutes)
- Wait for the builds to appear on [the Releases tab on GitHub](https://github.com/zed-industries/zed/releases) (typically takes around 30 minutes)
- Proof-read and edit the release notes as needed.
- Download the artifacts for each release and test that you can run them locally.
- Publish the release.